/* SAVE YOURSELF HOURS... /* IMPORT THESE COMMENTS INTO: SchoolReportWriter.COM /* No.1 in GOOGLE - "BEST TEACHER REPORTS APP": /* - TRUSTED by 1000s of teachers, since 2012 /* - QUICKLY create personalised reports /* - PASTE into your school system, Word etc /* - GENDER NEUTRAL option /* - DEMO video at SchoolReportWriter.COM /* FOR HELP see end of this document. /* Subjects: English, Science, Mathematics (Maths), General Attitude/Behaviour, Improvement Targets /* Author says: /* "Comment sections are titled by subjects and subcategories /* i.e English, Writing. /* /* Covers KS2 core subjects in National Curriculum - English, /* Maths and Science - as well as general comments and targets /* for improvement. /* /* Designed for middle school reporting. /* /* Hope this helps and thanks again for providing this awesome /* software [SchoolReportWriter.COM free app - ed.]" COMMENTS: 4- opening 1=#N has had a great year in science. 2=#N has done well in science this year. 3=#N has had ups and downs in science this year, but has managed to prevail at the end of the year. 4=Overall, #N had a good year in science, 5=#N has made huge improvements over the year and should be proud of #s. 6=#N has had ups and downs this year in science. 7=Overall #N has made good progress during the course of the year. COMMENTS: 4-behavior 1=One goal for next year would be less disruptive in class and focus more on the material at hand. 2=This year #e has been rather social and at times disruptive and I encourage #m to focus more next year in class. COMMENTS: 4-close 1=It has been a pleasure teaching #N this year. 2=I wish #m the best of luck next year. 3=I have really enjoyed teaching #N the past two years and I wish #m the best of luck next year. 4=I look forward to another year with #N! 5=I hope that #N has a restful summer and is recharged for the new year. COMMENTS: ability 1=#E grasps new scientific concepts quickly and then can use these to try and explain the results of experiments. 2=#E generally understands new scientific concepts and is beginning to be able to use these to explain the results of experiments. 3=#E generally understands new scientific concepts well and is beginning to be able to use these to explain the results of experiments. 4=#E generally understands new scientific concepts well. 5=#E always understands new scientific concepts well. 6=#E generally understands new scientific concepts quickly. 7=#E tries hard to understand new scientific concepts and now needs to use #h knowledge to try and explain results of experiments. 8=#E needs careful explanations to learn new scientific concepts but always tries hard to understand. COMMENTS: approach 1=#N has approached all aspects of science work with enthusiasm and interest. 2=#N has approached all aspects of science work with interest and enthusiasm. 3=#N really enjoys science and has approached all aspects of our work with interest and enthusiasm. 4=#N has really enjoyed all aspects of the science work we have covered this year and 'is developing good exploratory techniques. 5=#N has shown a quiet interest in the areas we have covered in science. 6=#N has a questioning and inquisitive mind and can offer suggestions and ideas in class discussions. 7=#N has a good general knowledge and is willing to share this with others during class discussions. 8=#N participates well during class discussions and can always be relied on to offer ideas and suggestions. 9=#N has a good general knowledge and can always be relied on to offer ideas and suggestions during class discussions. 10=#N has a very good general knowledge and is willing to share this with others during class discussions 11=#N has a very good general knowledge, but sometimes lacks the confidence to share this with the class during discussions. - 12=#N has a good general knowledge, and uses this well to think about what #h is learning. COMMENTS: behavior 1=Sometimes #e can be disruptive during class. 2=#E is very social and needs constant reminders to stay on task. 3=Sometimes #e can be disruptive during class. This behavior has impeded #h learning and in turn has affected #h grade. 4=#E often daydreams in class and misses important information 5=#H behavior in class has been highly disruptive with contant irrelevant or inapporpriate comments and I would appreciate a curb in this behavior. 6=Sometimes #e can be disruptive during class. While the disruption has not affected #h grade, it distracts the rest of the class. COMMENTS: effort 1=#E has shown a positive attitude towards the subject and involves #s to the best of #h ability. 2=#E is an extremely able and enthusiastic member of the group, who takes a keen interest in the subject. 3=#E is an enthusiastic member of the class and asks great questions. 4=#E is a very conscientious student and puts effort into everything #e does. 5=#E has shown a positive attitude towards the subject and involves #s to the best of #h ability. 6=#E has been working hard, particularly towards the end of the quarter and if #e started with this effort from the beginning of next quarter, #e will make even bigger strides. 7=#N's progress in this area of the curriculum has been inconsistent during the course of the year. 8=#N is easily distracted and need to focus on the task at hand. 9=#E is easily distracted and needs to focus on the task at hand. 10=#E is an enthusiastic member of the group, who generally takes a keen interest in the subject. 11=#E is an able and enthusiastic member of the group, who has demonstrated a keen interest in the subject. 12=#E is an able member of the group, who generally shows an interest in the subject. 13=#E is a fairly able member of the group, who has shown some interest in the subject. COMMENTS: English - Opener 1=#N enjoys discussing texts in English and #h general written work is now better organised, and structured more thoughtfully. 2=#N has been encouraged to take an active part in shared reading and writing activities as well as independent work. 3=#N has recently made good progress in this area of the curriculum, and now shows greater confidence in #h ability to express #s on paper. 4=#N's progress has been inconsistent during the course of the year. COMMENTS: English - Reading (1) 1=#E has achieved full fluency in #h reading and has good expression when reading aloud. 2=#E is expected to read a variety of materials. #E can create atmosphere when reading aloud, by varying pace and intonation and is deriving more pleasure from #h books. 3=#E reads independently showing good expression and understanding. #E has an affinity with books and enjoys silent reading. #E is starting to use very descriptive words in #h own writing; often picking them up from the books #e has read. 4=#N's reading has shown good progress this year. #E reads a variety of books with growing expression and good fluency. 5=#E can select and evaluate information from a wide range of reference materials. 6=#E reads independently showing good expression and understanding. #E shows obvious enjoyment in reading, choosing a good range of appropriate texts. 7=#E reading is increasingly fluent, and #e uses #h voice well to bring the characters and plot to life. 8=#E reads fluently, with appropriate expression, deriving pleasure from an increasingly wide range of books. 9=#E demonstrates a good level of fluency when reading. #E reads with understanding and enjoys using reference books. 10=In poetry lessons, #e can comment critically on the overall impact of a poem, showing how the language and themes have been developed. 11=#E can find and select information and use it effectively. 12=#E is becoming a competent reader and is starting to enjoy more demanding books. #E is able to read silently, with sustained concentration. 13=#E demonstrates a good level of reading fluency, and #e puts expression into #h voice. #E is now reading a wider range of texts and has a growing enthusiasm for books. 14=#E reads independently showing good understanding, and is starting to use descriptive words in #h own writing; often picking them up from the books #e has read. 15=#N's reading has shown good progress this year. #E reads a variety of books and styles with growing expression and increasing fluency. 16=#E shows a developing interest in reading; and is reading a range of more testing books. 17=#E now enjoys reading more demanding books. 18=#E has really improved #h reading this year. #E is choosing a range of more demanding and interesting texts. This variety of styles will lead to a consequent maturity in #N's story writing. 19=#N's reading is gaining in fluency. #E is more willing to share a book with an adult during the Literacy Hour and senses that #e is making some improvement this year. 20=#E is now reading with greater fluency as a result of more regular practice; and is certainly deriving pleasure from #h books. COMMENTS: English - Reading (2) 1=#E is reading more fluently as a result of regular practice, and enjoys reading more demanding books. #E can talk about what #e has read, showing a depth of understanding. 2=#E is expected to read a variety of materials and reads fluently, with appropriate expression. 3=#E improvement in reading has been excellent and #e is now more confident and enjoying books. 4=#E is beginning to introduce expression into the way #e reads. #E prefers reference books to story books, and particularly enjoys silent reading. 5=#E reads books and poems with an increased confidence in #h abilities. 6=#E, at times, can be a reluctant reader and therefore has been encouraged to look for books which interest #m. #E is now more willing to talk about the texts #e reads. 7=#E is now more confident about #h ability in English and enjoys reading a wider range of books. 8=#N's reading has improved and #e is more aware of the value of books. 9=In #h reading, #e shows increasing fluency but should try to take more notice of punctuation. This will help to improve #h understanding of the text. Generally, #e is beginning to make good progress but #e now needs to read more challenging books. 10=#E is a reluctant reader and needs encouragement to become interested in books. If #e is to improve #e must read more regularly at home. COMMENTS: English - Reading (3) 1=#E is reading more fluently as a result of regular practice, and enjoys reading more demanding books. #E can talk about what #e has read, showing a depth of understanding. 2=#E is expected to read a variety of materials and reads fluently, with appropriate expression. 3=#E improvement in reading has been excellent and #e is now more confident and enjoying books. 4=#E is beginning to introduce expression into the way #e reads. #E prefers reference books to story books, and particularly enjoys silent reading. 5=#E reads books and poems with an increased confidence in #h abilities. 6=#E, at times, can be a reluctant reader and therefore has been encouraged to look for books which interest #m. #E is now more willing to talk about the texts #e reads. 7=#E is now more confident about #h ability in English and enjoys reading a wider range of books. 8=#N's reading has improved and #e is more aware of the value of books. 9=In #h reading, #e shows increasing fluency but should try to take more notice of punctuation. This will help to improve #h understanding of the text. Generally, #e is beginning to make good progress but #e now needs to read more challenging books. 10=#E is a reluctant reader and needs encouragement to become interested in books. If #e is to improve #e must read more regularly at home. COMMENTS: English - Speaking, Listening (1) 1=#E listens attentively. When asked to talk about #h work, #e reports back clearly and concisely. 2=#N's spoken comments are often perceptive and reflect #h well-developed listening skills. 3=When asked to talk about Literacy texts, #e speaks in front of an audience with confidence, and shows a super understanding of the ideas under discussion. 4=#E listens attentively, responds well to the ideas of others and can report back clearly and concisely. 5=#E listens attentively and responds well to the suggestions and ideas of others. 6=#E listens attentively in class. 7=#E listens extremely well, and invariably makes perceptive comments during discussions. 8=#E contributes well to class discussions, offering quite perceptive comments. 9=#E contributes well to class discussions, often injecting some humour, and is willing to justify #h opinions and feelings to others. 10=#E is not afraid to express #h feelings and opinions to others during class discussions; and speaks with greater clarity and thought. 11=#E is well informed, and quietly puts #h point of view over in class discussions. #E listens with interest during these sessions. 12=#E is well informed. #E listens with interest during class discussions and is very composed when answering questions. COMMENTS: English - Speaking, Listening (2) 1=#E acting skills are super, and #e can deliver #h lines with aplomb. 2=#E listens superbly, and can put forward #h own points of view clearly and articulately. 3=#E contributes well to discussions, usually paying close attention to what is being said. #E is quite shy in class situation and must learn to value, and put forward, #h own opinions. 4=#E responds more confidently in a small group situation. 5=#E contributes well to class discussions, offering quite perceptive comments, and always listens at6tentively. #E makes excellent responses to stories and poems. 6=During class discussions, #N's verbal contribution is not as high as it could be. 7=#E is a good contributor to class discussions, and latterly is thinking more carefully about the point #e is trying to make. 8=#E is quite shy in a class situation but has learned to value, and put forward, #h own opinions. 9=#E listens well to others and comments sensibly on what has been said when asked to do so. COMMENTS: English - Speaking, Listening (3) 1=#E generally listens attentively and makes good responses to stories and poems. #E can be self-conscious about speaking in front of others. 2=#E listens well in discussions and is joining in with more enthusiasm. #E generally thinks carefully about the point #e is trying to get over to others. 3=#E is not a confident speaker, but enjoys listening to stories. #E is beginning to take part in discussions, and give #h point of view. 4=#E must curb #h tendency to daydream when involved in class discussions. 5=When asked to talk about #h work in a group, #e is beginning to participate more readily and can express #h point of view sensibly. #E is able to discuss a book's plot, demonstrating a good understanding of the material read. 6=#E listens well in class, and is not afraid to express #h feelings and opinions to others. #E needs to remember to indicate when #e is unclear about an idea under discussion. 7=#E is beginning to take part in discussions, but usually has to be encouraged to do so. 8=#E is beginning to participate more readily during discussions and can express #h point of view sensibly. 9=When asked to talk about #h work in groups, #e will quietly offer #h views and opinions. 10=During class discussions, #e contributes #h views confidently but becomes distracted when listening to others. 11=During class discussions, #N's verbal contribution is not as high as it could be. #E responds more confidently in a small group situation. COMMENTS: English - Spelling (1) 1=#E is a good speller, and #h handwriting is joined accurately. 2=#E is showing improvement in #h spelling and will use a dictionary to find or correct a spelling, when prompted. 3=#E spells accurately many polysyllabic words. 4=#E uses a dictionary carefully when checking spellings. 5=#N's spelling is still erratic, but #e is starting to be more aware of key patterns. 6=#H spelling is much improved. 7=#E often finds #e can spell a word correctly if #e thinks about it but needs to be encouraged to check #h work for errors. 8=#E spells most words accurately, but must remember to read #h writing through to check for unforced errors. 9=#E needs to reinforce #h knowledge of homophonic words to ensure accurate spelling. 10=#N's spelling is generally accurate, and #e is able to correct #h own work using a dictionary. 11=#E has made a good attempt to consolidate #h spellings, and seems happier writing stories in a limited amount of time. 12=#E needs to reinforce #h present knowledge of spelling patterns by regularly practising key words. 13=#E has worked hard to improve #h spelling, but still needs to read #h work back to check for avoidable errors. 14=#E has made a good effort to learn #h spellings and has also developed #h handwriting; introducing accurate joins. 15=#E understanding and use of punctuation is developing steadily, and #e is being encouraged to have a go at difficult spellings and use a dictionary where possible. 16=#E still needs support with spelling. 17=#E spelling needs constant reinforcement. 18=#E reads with fluency but lacks some expression when reading aloud. 19=#E is a fluent and expressive reader. 20=#E has been reading a variety of fiction and non-fiction books which #e can recall with great interest. COMMENTS: English - Spelling (2) 1=#E has read a wide variety of stories and #e can talk about the characters and situations with good recall. 2=#E is continuing to widen #h reading experience with a variety of stories which #e can recount with enthusiasm. 3=#E reads clearly but is lacking in expression when #e is reading aloud. 4=#E is beginning to become more fluent and therefore more confident in #h reading and has covered a variety of stories over the year. 5=#E has tried very hard and shown a great interest in #h reading books, consequently #e has improved a great deal. 6=#E is inconsistent in #h reading ability - some days #e will misread words and is not at all fluent; it is not surprising that #h recall of stories is often confused. 7=#E shows a spasmodic interest in reading: sometimes #e is keen to practise at home, at other times #e has to be encouraged to take #h reading times seriously. 8=#H confidence will develop much more if regular reading at home backs up #h daily school reading; #e must be willing to participate fully in this. 9=A great deal of confidence has been gained by #m with #h continuing progress through the 'Wellington Square' reading scheme. 10=#E must be encouraged to sound-out letter blends in difficult words and not simply wait to be told. 11=#E does try hard to sound-out letter blends in words that #e has difficulty reading. 12=It is a pity that #e finds it difficult to sit silently and read; #e is distracted far too easily and this can disrupt other children. 13=The content of #N's written work is always of a good standard but #e must focus more on checking through #h own work for mistakes. 14=#E has difficulty remembering that simple punctuation is a very important part of clear writing; #e must plan #h ideas much more carefully and listen to instructions before #e starts any writing. 15=#E has tried hard to check #h writing more closely this year; 16=#E still rushes and finds it hard to spot #h mistakes. 17=#N's stories and other writings are very clear; #e plans well and the end-product is always intelligently and imaginatively written. 18=#E is imaginative in #h creative writing and #e writes at length with good punctuation; #e can also explain clearly and concisely in other forms of writing. 19=#E enjoys writing once #e gets started; #e writes at length but forgets to use #h knowledge of well-known rules on punctuation. #E gives up very easily when writing 'free' stories; #e has difficulty thinking-out ideas and putting these into a progressive piece of writing. COMMENTS: English - Spelling (3) 1=Once #e has settled down and become involved with #h writing #e produces clear, imaginative pieces and writes in a well-structured way using good punctuation. 2=#E is rather lazy when it comes to writing stories of any length; 3=#E has some good ideas in discussions but sometimes fails to produce the finished goods. 4=#E finds writing very hard; practise in making-up simple and clear sentences is still essential for #m. 5=#E finds writing exercises hard; #e has imagination but is easily disillusioned when #e tries to get #h ideas down on paper. 6=Talking too much can affect both #N's efforts and the end result of #h written work. #E must plan #h writing quietly and carefully and #e must read #h work carefully when finished. COMMENTS: English - Writing (1) 1=#E writes well-structured stories; #e use of interesting detail and expressive words means that #h creative writing involves the reader. 2=#E writes stories with feeling and expression, and is willing to draft and redraft them, when appropriate. #E has a lively imagination. 3=#E forms #h handwriting joins correctly, and #h work is invariably well presented. 4=#E general written work is coherently structured and well executed. 5=#E is developing a solid understanding of the rules of grammar and punctuation. #H stories are usually nicely planned and imaginative. 6=#E has made good progress during the Literacy Hour; #h story writing is more descriptive and increasingly well plotted. 7=#E is able to write independently, in complete sentences, using capital letters, full stops and question marks; and can spell most common words. 8=#E produced a beautifully presented and well crafted letter during Literacy work. 9=#E can revise and redraft #h own work, using a dictionary as necessary. 10=#E reads fluently and with appropriate expression. #H imaginative writing has some interesting ideas and #e gives careful thought to making the meaning clear. 11=#E is willing to listen to advice and this has led to a wider use of adjectives and descriptive phrases in #h work. 12=#N's imaginative story work is full of original ideas and #e uses a good range of vocabulary. 13=#N's handwriting is well-formed and accurately joined. 14=#E has a generally accurate grasp of sentence punctuation; writing fluently, with considerable thought and inventiveness. However, #e still needs to check through #h work before handing it in to eliminate preventable errors. 15=#E writes with confidence, and #h stories are now more detailed and descriptive. #E tends to set #h ideas down in a colloquial fashion, but is becoming more aware of when to use formal language. 16=#E writes imaginatively, though #h work is usually concise. #E needs to introduce more descriptive phrases in order to hold the reader's attention. #N's handwriting is much neater, and more legible. #E must remember to join. 17=#E has a lively writing style and is often quite imaginative. #H use of more advanced punctuation can, at times, be erratic. 18=#E has tried hard to grasp the basics of sentence punctuation. While #e still has difficulties with commas and quotation marks, #e seems generally secure about full stops and the use of capitals. #H story writing needs greater use of descriptive words and phrases. 19=When writing, #e uses sentence punctuation accurately, and is beginning to introduce descriptive phrases. 20=When asked to present #h thoughts on paper, #e is less expressive, though the amount #e writes has increased dramatically over the year. #E is very slow when writing stories, and although #e has good ideas, #h stories are never very long. COMMENTS: English - Writing (2) 1=#E handwriting is invariably neat, though it can become untidy during creative writing. 2=#E is starting to use descriptive words in #h own writing, picking them up from the books #e has read. Though #e still needs to develop #h stories further, by adding greater detail. 3=This year in story writing, #e has developed imaginative plots, but they do occasionally lack a clear structure. 4=#N's written work is becoming more organised, showing greater attention to detail. #E produces work that is accurately punctuated, and has been encouraged to redraft #h writing in order to develop #h thoughts. 5=#E is developing a better understanding of the rules of grammar and punctuation, and has clear handwriting. 6=#N's written work is now better organised and structured more thoughtfully. 7=#E use of punctuation is good, but further work on apostrophes is required. #N's handwriting is clear, and #e has made a good start with cursive script. 8=#E is able to write independently, and use full stops and capital letters but not always accurately. Therefore, #e needs to spend more time revising and redrafting #h work. 9=#E has tried hard to grasp the basics of sentence punctuation. Though #e still has difficulties using commas and quotation marks, #e seems generally secure about full stops and capitals. 10=#E is starting to produce writing that uses complete sentences, and #h spellings are more accurate. However, #e must read #h work through to check that the grammar and punctuation makes sense. 11=#E produces writing that is generally well punctuated. #N's handwriting has shown some recent improvement but #e needs to continue to practise #h letter joins. 12=#N's handwriting has recently improved but #e will need to practise #h letter joins. 13=#N's handwriting has made some progress but #e must practise #h letter formation. 14=#E is beginning to join #h handwriting, but still requires further practice. 15=#N's handwriting has improved recently. 16=#E has made a good attempt to form #h handwriting correctly and now takes a lot more care with #h presentation of work. #E is often keen to write #h thoughts and ideas down on paper, and is starting to organise #h writing more effectively. #H grasp of basic punctuation is not yet secure, but #e is making good progress. 17=#E wrote a super newspaper article, after listening very carefully during the Literacy Hour. 18=#E improved handwriting has led to #h feeling more confident about #h own writing; and resulted in longer, more detailed pieces of work. 19=#E is writing more, and is keener to express #h point of view on paper, but it does take a long time for #m to work through a task. 20=#E has a good use of sentence punctuation, though more work is needed, especially on the use of speech marks. #H handwriting is clear, and #e has made a good start with cursive script. COMMENTS: English - Writing (3) 1=#E has tried hard to master the basics of sentence punctuation, though #e tends to write slowly, and sometimes does not finish #h work in the time available. At times, #e will lack control over #h handwriting and this means #h letter formation is poor. 2=#N's handwriting is more controlled, and #e makes a good attempt to spell simple words correctly. #E writes in basic, often short, sentences. Longer sentences with more detail should be #N's aim next year. 3=#H imaginative work has some good ideas but #e needs to develop #h vocabulary. 4=#H handwriting is gradually improving and #e generally presents #h work well. Though #e will need further practise joining letters. 5=#N's handwriting has improved though it is still over-large and uncontrolled at times. 6=#N's handwriting has improved, but #e must join more. 7=#H stories show a better use of punctuation and a greater awareness of setting and plot. 8=#H has made some progress in written English this year. #E is now writing stories of greater length, but still without consistent punctuation. 9=#H presentation has improved over the year, and #h writing is more legible. 10=#H handwriting is neater and less inconsistent. 11=At present #h general writing lacks consistency. For example, #N's stories are without substantial content, and poorly punctuated. #E therefore needs to appreciate that #h English work will only improve if #e pays close attention to what #e is being taught. 12=#E has gaps in #h knowledge, due to extended absences, and will need considerable reinforcement of basic skills if #e is to improve on #h current level of literacy. 13=#E is producing writing that uses complete sentences, and #h punctuation is more accurate. #E writes slowly and this means that, at times, #e does not get through all that #e needs to. 14=To improve #h writing, #N needs to organize and plan #h stories before writing. COMMENTS: english past1 1=#N responds more confidently in a small group situation but #e is beginning to take part in discussions. 2=#E usually has to be encouraged to stay on topic though. 3=#E has been encouraged to take an active part in shared reading and writing activities as well as independent work. 4=#E is a reluctant reader and needs encouragement to become interested in books. 5=If #e is to improve #e must read more regularly at home. 6=#N's written work is now better organised and structured more thoughtfully. #H imaginative work has some good ideas but #e needs to develop #h vocabulary. 7=During class discussions, #N's verbal contribution is not as high as it could be. 8=#E must curb #h tendency to daydream when involved in class discussions. 9=#E, at times, can be a reluctant reader and therefore has been encouraged to look for books which interest #m. 10=#E is now more willing to talk about the texts #e reads. 11=#N is developing a better understanding of the rules of grammar and punctuation, and has clear handwriting. 12=#H imaginative work has some good ideas but #e needs to develop #h vocabulary. 13=#N listens attentively in class. 14=#E is a good contributor to class discussions, and is now thinking more carefully about the point #e is trying to make. 15=#N's reading has shown fair progress this year. 16=#E reads a variety of books with growing expression and #e is reading more fluently as a result of regular practice. 17=#E can talk about what #e has read, showing a depth of understanding. 18=#E has a lively writing style and is often quite imaginative. 19=#H use of more advanced punctuation can, at times, be erratic but #e has made progress in written English this year. COMMENTS: English YR3 Handwriting 1=When #e chooses, #N can produce beautiful handwriting and is making an effort to improve #h bookwork. If #e keeps taking care, #e will have a beautiful cursive handwriting style. 2=#N produces neat bookwork and is developing an attractive style of cursive handwriting. 3=#N has made a commendable effort to improve #h handwriting and #h bookwork is looking beautiful. #E is developing an attractive style of cursive handwriting. 4=#N finds the physical skill of writing difficult, but with continued effort #e will develop a neat cursive handwriting style. 5=#N's letters are not always correctly proportioned, but with further care #e will develop a neat cursive handwriting style. COMMENTS: General comments (1) 1=In general #N has a very positive attitude towards all aspects of #h school work and sets a good example with #h behaviour. 2=#N is a quiet member of the class, who has a considerate and thoughtful nature. 3=#N works very hard and always gives #h best effort in all areas of the curriculum. #E has produced some work to be extremely proud of. 4=#N has become more confident about answering questions and talking in front of the class 5=#N has worked hard in many curriculum areas and has produced some work to be really proud of. 6=#N is quiet in class but works hard. 7=#N has a large circle of friends and is both liked and well respected by the class. 8=#N has a mature attitude and uses #h own initiative to develop work, having produced some excellent homework. 9=#N has a mature approach to many aspects of #h work and shows independence, settling down to work without a fuss. 10=#N has a positive attitude towards all aspects of #h school work, and sets a superb example. 11=#N is extremely conscientious, producing work to be really proud of. 12=#N sets an excellent example of good behaviour and has a sensible attitude. 13=#N has a high level of independent working skills. 14=#N is considerate and is always polite and sensible. 15=#N takes a lot of pride in #h work. 16=#N is a friendly member of the class, who works with enthusiasm and regularly contributes to class discussion. 17=#N is a confident member of the class and contributes well in lessons. 18=#N is extremely conscientious and has produced some excellent work to be really proud of. 19=#N is considerate with many friends and is always polite and sensible. 20=#N is a helpful pupil who is sensible and well behaved. COMMENTS: General comments (2) 1=#E is a cheerful pupil and a popular member of the class. 2=#E gets on well with a variety of children in the class and is a very lively and cheerful pupil. 3=#E is making excellent progress. 4=#E makes good contributions to discussions in class and often asks questions. 5=#E gets along well with others and has many friends 6=#E has many friends and is always pleasant. 7=#E gets on well with a variety of children in the class and is a very lively and cheerful pupil. 8=#E has been working extremely hard in a variety of curriculum areas. 9=#E seems to prefer to work on an individual basis rather than in a group situation. 10=#E can work equally well independently, or with others 11=#E works well in a group situation. 12=#E is always helpful and willing to undertake jobs around the classroom. 13=#E is always polite and friendly and gets on well with everyone. 14=#E is usually cheerful with a smile and a joke. 15=#E has a good sense of humour and enjoys sharing a joke with children and adults alike. 16=Although the standard of presentation of #h work has been variable, #e works very hard and has produced some work to be extremely proud of. 17=#E needs to put more effort into written work 18=#E is too easily distracted in class. 19=#E is generally hard-working, although #e can be easily be distracted. 20=#E attitude to school and work in general has improved this term and #e has calmed down. COMMENTS: General comments (3) 1=#E has produced some good work when #e makes the effort but is capable of more. 2=#E must ask if #e does not understand the work and in this way #e will make much more progress. 3=Recently, #e has settled down well and worked much harder in class. 4=However, #h behaviour can still be silly at times and #e needs to realise that next year #e will be in the oldest year group in the school. 5=#H attitude to work when working in class is good but #e needs to do #h homework in order to make progress. 6=In order to maintain the progress that #e is making, #e needs to listen carefully to instructions. 7=Unfortunately, #e lacks confidence in #h own ability in some subjects and needs to realise that #e is capable of producing work of a high standard when #e puts in the effort. 8=Although #e is beginning to show signs of maturity, there are days when #e can be silly and lack the concentration needed to make progress. 9=If #e develops this more positive approach to work and behaviour, #e will reach #h full potential. 10=#E is a clever capable pupil, but this is not always reflected in #h written work. 11=#E has the ability to produce good work in all subjects but needs to avoid the temptation to chatter for sustained periods to friends. 12=At certain times #e does find difficulty in remaining on task as #e prefers to 'chat' to others around #m. In order to maintain the progress that #e is making, #e needs to give #h full concentration at all times. 13=#E needs to help with putting resources away. 14=#E needs to concentrate and apply #s in full to achieve #h full potential. 15=I am sure that the challenge of a year six curriculum will inspire #m to realise #h full potential. 16=#E sometimes lacks confidence, and needs to start being more independent in the classroom. 17=#E is keen to answer questions, but needs to remember to put up #h hand. 18=Occasionally, #e can be easily distracted and #e needs to realise that #e must settle down to work straight away. 19=#E always settles down quickly to work, but needs to listen carefully to the instructions given so #e can complete the work successfully. 20=#H attitude to school and work in general has improved this term and #e has calmed down. COMMENTS: General comments (4) 1=#E has made a good start to year 5 and is settling well into the class. 2=#E has a wide circle of friends and relates well to adults in school. 3=#E has established good relationships with #h peers and adults within school. 4=#E has a close circle of friends and gets on well with any adults #e comes into contact with. 5=#E socialises well with the other children and relates well to adults within school. 6=#E has made an impressive start to year 5 and has settled into the class. 7=#E has made an excellent start to year 5 and has settled easily into the class. 8=#E is adapting well to the demands of the upper school. 9=#E is a confident child who is always polite and friendly. 10=#E is a friendly child who displays a good sense of humour. 11=#E is generally a quiet child who tends to keep #s to #s. 12=#E is a pleasant, friendly child who is always polite. 13=#E shows maturity and co-operates well in the classroom. 14=#E shows a positive attitude to #h work and school. 15=#E shows enthusiasm for #h work. 16=#E sometimes shows a little lack of motivation when it comes to work. 17=#E needs to focus on #h listening skills this year. 18=#E listens well in inputs and contributes to discussions 19=#E has good concentration skills 20=I would like #m to focus on improving #h handwriting this year. COMMENTS: General comments (5) 1=I would like #m to focus on improving the presentation of #h work this year. 2=#E has made a good effort with the presentation of #h work. 3=#E has made some effort to improve the presentation of #h work. 4=#E needs to take homework a little more seriously, ensuring that work is returned to school at the correct time. 5=#E has started to take homework a little more seriously, returning #h work at the correct time. 6=#E has worked conscientiously in all areas of the curriculum and made every effort to present #h work well. 7=It would be of benefit to #m if #e remembers to do #h homework and return it to school at the right time. 8=I would like #m to remember to take #h Wellington Square work home every day and to return it to school the next day. 9=#E is a willing helper and takes responsibility seriously. 10=#E is capable of working co-operatively within a group as well as independently. 11=#E is not yet capable of working totally independently of adult help and relies on the support of adults for some tasks. 12=#E finds it easier to work on #h own away from the distractions of working alongside other children but needs to develop the self-discipline of not allowing #s to become distracted. 13=#E has had an excellent year. 14=#E is a good team member with the ability to lead a group and support others sensitively within it. 15=#E is happy working either independently or as part of a group. 16=#E has shown great maturity when dealing with #h peers. 17=#E has maintained #h enthusiasm for learning throughout Year 5, participating fully in every aspect of the curriculum and beyond school in after-school clubs. 18=This is constantly reflected in the quality of #h work. 19=#E has had a good year academically, achieving good results across the curriculum. 20=#E takes great pride in the presentation of #h work, and the content is of equally high quality. COMMENTS: General comments (6) 1=#E has a very positive attitude to school and works quietly and conscientiously in class. 2=#E has made good progress over the year and is much better now at settling to a task, having developed a positive attitude to #h work. 3=#E has had a good year and continues to make good progress in #h work. 4=#H levels of concentration have shown an improvement over the year. 5=#E has a sensible and mature attitude to school. 6=#E is gaining in maturity and confidence, working towards greater independence in #h work. 7=Over the year #N's confidence has noticeably blossomed. 8=#E has a close circle of friends which has remained fairly constant throughout Year 5. 9=#E is a sociable child with a number of friends within the class. 10=#E is a happy, friendly child of a confident disposition. 11=#E has enjoyed good relationships with the others in the class and maintained a close friendship circle throughout the year. 12=#E is a confident and outgoing child who has developed a wide circle of friends and also has good relationships with adults around school. 13=#E has been a lively personality in the class, enjoying good relationships with a wide circle of friends. 14=#E is becoming more able to co-operate when #e is working within a group, depending on the nature of the task. 15=#E can, however, have a tendency to distract others from their work and #e needs to learn to respect their need to concentrate. 16=#E can, however, be easily distracted when listening to inputs and #e would do well to sit away from #h friends at these times so that the temptation is not so great! 17=#E lacks a little confidence in class discussions and will hold back unless encouraged to participate verbally. 18=#E is much more confident on a one to one or in a small group situation. 19=#E is a friendly but quiet child who lacks confidence when speaking to the class and joining in with class discussions. As a consequence #e seems to find it easier to work independently rather than within a group. 20=#E needs very clear structures to work to and much support to ensure that #e focuses on a task and completes it within a given time. COMMENTS: General comments (7) 1=#E has a circle of friends with whom #e socialises well during break times. 2=#E is a popular child with a wide friendship group among #h peers. #E has the odd tiff with #h friends but this always appears to resolve itself very quickly. 3=#E has worked with enthusiasm throughout #h time in Year 5, showing a positive attitude in all that #e tackles. 4=#E has had a good year and has continued to make progress in all areas of #h work due to #h positive approach. 5=#E is a quiet child with a good attitude towards #h work 6=#E has a very positive attitude to school which is reflected in the standard of #h work and #h continued ability to focus on the task in hand. 7=#E has a good attitude towards school and is well motivated and conscientious in class. 8=In group situations, #e is a good team member, making valuable contributions and supporting others. 9=When working in a group #e is a good team member, making valuable contributions to the work. 10=#E is a good team member in group work situations as well as being capable of working well on #h own. 11=#E is a well-liked member of the class and I have enjoyed having #m in my class this year! 12=#E is a happy and popular character in the class and I have thoroughly enjoyed having #m in my class. 13=#E has worked well and with enthusiasm throughout the year. 14=#E has much enthusiasm in particular areas of the curriculum which I'm sure #e will develop successfully. 15=#E has good concentration and settles well to tasks in class. 16=#E has proved #s to be hard-working and motivated in most areas of #h work. 17=#E still occasionally forgets #s and becomes distracted, and can be prone to chattiness. 18=#H maturity has continued to develop and #e shows great sensitivity towards others. 19=#E has a close circle of friends and is very supportive to others within the class, helping those who need it whenever #e can. 20=#H good-natured and helpful disposition has been an asset to the class. COMMENTS: General comments (8) 1=Throughout the year, #e has always been polite, helpful and co-operative. 2=#E has always behaved well in class. 3=On the whole a good year, but #e would do well to improve on #h concentration and listening skills for next year. 4=#E has a mature and responsible attitude to #h work and to #h chores around the classroom. 5=#E is a friendly, helpful child who relates well to #h peers and is confident in #h dealings with adults. 6=#E is a friendly child and has had good relationships with any adults #e comes into contact with in school. 7=Although mostly of a sensible and studious nature, #e can have spells of silliness and giggly behaviour which can be detrimental and #e would do well to learn to control these in the classroom environment. COMMENTS: General YR3 Conclusion 1=Overall, I'm pleased with how #N is doing. Keep up the great work. 2=To improve #e needs to #? 3=Although #N's report says that #e is #?, with consistent reading at home and focus on #h word sorts, I am confident that #N will make excellent progress this year. COMMENTS: General YR3 Intro 1=#N is a friendly, lively student who is making steady progress in all areas of #h learning. 2=#N is a helpful student who is making steady progress. 3=#N is a diligent and capable student who is eager to learn new skills and always tries to do #h best. 4=#N is working hard and all aspects of #h learning are slowly progressing. 5=#N is a capable student with a wonderful mind. #E has the potential to achieve high grades. 6=#N is a capable, energetic student who is making #? progress in all aspects of #h learning. 7=#N is an enthusiastic, gifted student who takes a keen interest in all areas of #h learning. COMMENTS: General YR3 Sentence1 1=Although #h numeracy and literacy skills have strengthened this year, they are still behind what is expected at this year level. 2=#E is making excellent progress in all areas of #h learning. 3=#E is establishing good work habits and it has been a pleasure to watch #m develop this year. 4=Although #e is becoming more responsible, #e does need to obey classroom rules even when #e is not being supervised. 5=#N works very hard and always gives #h best effort in all areas of the curriculum. #E has produced some work to be extremely proud of. 6=#N is extremely conscientious, producing work to be really proud of. 7=#E is still developing a work ethic and finds starting and completing written work a challenge. 8=#E does need to use #h energy for appropriate activities that do not distract others. Making wise choices is a challenge for #N. COMMENTS: General YR3 Sentence2 1=#E is learning how to focus and manages to keep on task for longer periods of time. 2=#N watches out for the needs of others and it has been a pleasure to have #m in our classroom. 3=#N is valued by #h peers and it has been a pleasure to have #m in our classroom. 4=Although some of #h skills are lagging behind what is expected at this year level, #e has been able to improve #h performance this year. 5=#N is always kind and helpful and it has been a pleasure to have #m in our classroom. 6=#N continued to blossom as the year progressed and it has been a pleasure to have #m in our classroom. 7=#N is a friendly, kind #b and I have thoroughly enjoyed having #m in my class this year. 8=Careful listening is a challenge for #N. #E needs to keep #h eyes on the teacher and resist the temptation to fiddle with other things. 9=#H attitude to work when working in class is good but #e needs to do #h homework in order to make progress. 10=Unfortunately, #e lacks confidence in #h own ability in some subjects and needs to realise that #e is capable of producing work of a high standard when #e puts in the effort. 11=#E is keen to answer questions, but needs to remember to put up #h hand. COMMENTS: group work 1=#N has a sensible, mature approach to group working and uses equipment carefully, recording observations accurately. 2=#N works very well as a member of a group and uses equipment and materials in a sensible and responsible manner. 3=#N works well as a member of a small group and has had experience of using basic scientific equipment. 4=#N works reasonably well as part of a small group, but must try to keep #h concentration on the task in hand. 5=#N works co-operatively in a group situation, uses equipment maturely, and has learnt to make careful and accurate measurements. 6=#N is getting better at working co-operatively in a small group but sometimes needs to remember to listen carefully to others' suggestions and ideas. COMMENTS: investigation 1=#N responds to suggestions of how to find things out and, with help, makes #h own suggestions. 2=#N uses simple equipment provided and makes observations related to the task. 3=#N describes observations and records them using simple tables where it is appropriate to do so. 4=#N responds to suggestions, puts forward #h own ideas and, where appropriate, makes simple predictions. 5=#N makes relevant observations and measures quantities, such as length or mass, using a range of simple equipment. 6=#N with some help - can carry out a fair test, recognising and explaining why it is fair. 7=#N records observations in a variety of ways and provides explanations for observations and, where they occur, for simple patterns in recorded measurements. 8=#N recognises the need for fair tests and selects suitable equipment to use and makes a series of observations and measurements that are adequate for the task 9=#N presents observations and measurements clearly, using tables and bar charts. 10=#N can use graphs to point out and interpret patterns or trends in data and takes account of patterns when drawing conclusions COMMENTS: learner 1 1=In general #N has a very positive attitude towards all aspects of #h school work 2=#N works very hard and always gives #h best effort in all areas of the curriculum. #N has produced some work to be extremely proud of. 3=#N has become more confident about answering questions and talking in front of the class 4=#N is quiet in class but works hard. 5=#E has a mature approach to many aspects of #h work and shows independence, settling down to work without a fuss. 6=#N has a high level of independent working skills. 7=#N is a friendly member of the class, who works with enthusiasm and regularly contributes to class discussion. 8=#E is a confident member of the class and contributes well in lessons. 9=#E is extremely conscientious and has produced some excellent work to be really proud of. 10=#N is a helpful pupil who is sensible and well behaved. 11=#E is making excellent progress. 12=#N has been working extremely hard in a variety of curriculum areas. 13=#N works better on an individual basis rather than in a group situation. 14=#E can work equally well independently, or with others 15=#N works well in a group situation. 16=Although the standard of presentation of #h work has been variable. 17=#E is generally hardworking, although #e can be easily distracted. 18=#E is generally hardworking, although #e can be easily distracted. 19=#N has produced some good work when #e makes the effort but is capable of more. 20=In order to maintain the progress that #N is making, #e needs to listen carefully to instructions. COMMENTS: learner 2 1=Although #N is beginning to show signs of maturity, there are days when #e can be silly and lack the concentration needed to make progress 2=Unfortunately, #N lacks confidence in #h own ability in some subjects and needs to realise that #e is capable of producing work of a high standard when #e puts in the effort. 3=#E has the ability to produce good work in all subjects but needs to avoid the temptation to chatter for sustained periods to friends. 4=At certain times #N does find difficulty in remaining on task as #e prefers to 'chat' to others around #h. In order to maintain the progress that #e is making, #N needs to give #h full concentration at all times. 5=#E is keen to answer questions, but needs to remember to put up #h hand. 6=Occasionally, #N can be easily distracted and #e needs to realise that #e must settle down to work straightaway. 7=#N always settles down quickly to work, but needs to listen carefully to the instructions given so #e can complete the work successfully. COMMENTS: maths attitude1 1=#N approaches maths enthusiastically 2=#N needs to increase #h working pace. 3=#N needs to improve #h presentation 4=#N enjoys maths and is confident working in all aspects of the subject. 5=#N has made steady progress this year 6=#N has made excellent progress this year 7=#N enjoys working in all areas of maths 8=#N needs to ask when #e needs help. 9=#N could make more progress if #e had a little more faith in #h ability 10=#N shows #e is capable of working to a high level. 11=#N has worked hard in maths lessons this year. 12=#N is starting to develop more confidence in #h own ability. 13=#N enjoys maths and is confident working in all aspects of the subject. COMMENTS: maths attitude2 1=#N is gaining confidence in #h own ability and applies #s well to all areas of the subject. 2=#N has shown #h enthusiasm for the subject and for a challenge. 3=#N now needs to try to remain more focused and not distract others around #m in lessons. 4=Increased concentration will help #m progress further. 5=#N could make more progress if #e took #h time and was not distracted by what others are doing. 6=#N must ensure #e applies #s to the full at all times and complete sufficient amount of work each lesson. 7=#N approaches maths enthusiastically and has a very good understanding of the topics covered this year. 8=#N must stay focused and contribute to discussions. 9=#N is starting to develop more confidence in #h own ability. COMMENTS: maths checking 1=#N is capable of working to a high level but must check #h work carefully for accuracy. 2=#N must also check #h work to ensure sensible answers are given at all times 3=#N does need to make sure that #e checks #h written calculations to make sure #e does not make unnecessary errors. 4=#N must now start to check results before moving on. 5=#N needs to make sure that #e takes #h time to read and understand word problems in order to avoid unnecessary mistakes. 6=#N is able to use the right operation when solving a problem but needs to be more careful with #h working out and check #h answers to avoid simple mistakes. 7=#N is beginning to solve word problems, but needs to remember to read questions carefully and check #h working out. COMMENTS: mental 1=Recall of #h tables is also good enabling #m to utilize them to good effect in mental maths calculations 2=#E now needs to speed up recall of number facts to become more efficient in mental calculations. 3=#H mental maths and times table recall are secure. 4=#N demonstrates strong mental maths skills and times table recall 5=#N's next step is to have a quicker recall of multiplication tables and to check #h working out. 6=#N has a good knowledge of #h times tables and can apply them to mental calculations 7=#N now needs to develop #h own strategies for mental arithmetic so that speed and accuracy in calculations is improved. 8=#H mental maths and times table recall is improving 9=#N is gaining confidence in reciting and recalling simple times tables. 10=#H mental maths and times table recall is improving. 11=#H must now try to develop more strategies in order to become more proficient in mental calculations. 12=#H mental maths and times table recall is secure. 13=#H mental maths and times table recall is improving. 14=#N demonstrates strong mental maths skills and times table recall. 15=#H knowledge of #h times tables ensures accurate and efficient results in mental calculations. 16=#N must now speed up #h recall of number facts so #e can become more proficient in mental calculations. 17=#N's mental maths and times table recall are inconsistent. 18=#N's mental maths skills and times table recall are developing but still need regular practice to ensure rapid recall. COMMENTS: practical 1=#E has used a range of basic scientific equipment and has learnt the importance of making careful measurements during an experiment. 2=#E has carefully used a range of basic scientific equipment and has become more accurate when making measurements during an experiment. 3=#E understands the concept of fair testing and applies this during practical work. 4=#E is beginning to understand the concept of fair testing and is starting to apply this during practical work. 5=#E has extended #h understanding of fair testing and is competent in applying this during practical work. 6=#E has discussed the concept of fair testing and is learning to apply this during practical work. 7=#E is capable of drawing appropriate conclusion from experimental results and relating this to - scientific knowledge. 8=#E now needs to develop the ability to draw appropriate conclusion from experiments and relate #h findings to the scientific concepts learnt. COMMENTS: science concllusion 1=Overall, #N has made really good progress during the course of the year. COMMENTS: social 1 1=#N is a quiet member of the class, who has a considerate and thoughtful nature. 2=#N is a quiet and reserved member of the class 3=#N has a large circle of friends and is both liked and well respected by the class. 4=#N sets an excellent example of good behaviour and has a sensible attitude. 5=#E is considerate and is always polite and sensible. 6=#N is considerate with many friends and is always polite and sensible. 7=#N is a helpful pupil who is sensible and well behaved. 8=#E is a cheerful pupil and a popular member of the class. 9=#N gets on well with a variety of children in the class and is a very lively and cheerful pupil. 10=#N gets along well with others and has many friends 11=#E has many friends and is always pleasant. 12=#E gets on well with a variety of children in the class and is a very lively and cheerful pupil. 13=#N is always helpful and willing to undertake jobs around the classroom. 14=#E is always polite and friendly and gets on well with everyone. 15=#N is usually cheerful with a smile and a joke. 16=However, #h behaviour can still be silly at times and #e needs to realise that next year #e will be in the oldest year group in the school. 17=Although #N is beginning to show signs of maturity, there are days when #e can be silly and lack the concentration needed to make progress. COMMENTS: social 2 1=#N makes friends quickly in the classroom 2=#N is well-liked by classmates 3=#E handles disagreements with peers appropriately. 4=#E treats other students with fairness and understanding. 5=#N is a valued member of the class. 6=#N has encountered difficulties in getting along with other classmates 7=#N needs to realise the importance of listening to others' opinions. 8=#N is courteous and shows good manners in the classroom. 9=#N conducts #s with maturity 10=#N is kind and helpful to everyone in the class 11=#N sets an example of excellence in behaviour and cooperation. 12=#N is concerned about the feelings of others. 13=#N needs to show greater concern about others' feelings. 14=#N shows respect for teachers and peers. 15=#N is thoughtful in #h interaction with others. COMMENTS: targets1 1=#N needs to listen to and follow staff directions when they are first given. 2=#N needs to listen to staff instructions and follow their guidance, it is given for your benefit. 3=#N needs to listen to staff and follow their directions, focussing on your own behaviour and not the behaviour of your peers. 4=#N needs to start tasks immediately and stay focussed until activities are finished. 5=#N needs to start tasks immediately staying focussed until activities are finished. 6=#N needs to start tasks immediately, staying focussed until all activities are finished. #E should ask patiently for help if #e is finding tasks challenging. 7=#N needs to give 100% effort in all lessons and activities, starting work quickly and finishing all tasks. 8=#N needs to complete all tasks with the appropriate level of care and not be satisfied with rushing through just to have them finished. 9=#N needs to take more pride in #h work - try not to rush, check #h answers and present #h work neatly. 10=#N should continue to pay attention to the detail #e puts in #h work. 11=#N should continue to keep trying #h best at every activity, no matter how hard or challenging it is. 12=#N should continue to keep up the good work. 13=#N should keep up the good work. 14=#N should keep up the good work and continue to approach school life with the same positive outlook and good humour #e has demonstrated this year. 15=#N should continue to try hard next year. 16=#N should continue to try #h best next year. 17=#N should continue to show the same enthusiasm #e has shown this year. 18=#N should continue to approach school with the same enthusiasm #e has shown this year. 19=#N should continue to approach all lessons and activities with the same enthusiasm #e has shown this year. 20=#N should keep up the excellent work and continue to approach school life with the same positive outlook #e has displayed this year. #E should continue to keep trying #h best at every activity, no matter how hard or challenging it is and continue to take pride in #h work, always giving 100% effort in all lessons and activities COMMENTS: targets2 1=#N needs to take more pride in #h work - try not to rush, check #h answers and present #h work neatly 2=#E should also try to integrate more with the rest of the class 3=#E could also be a bit more accommodating of people wishing to join #h group of friends 4=#E should, nevertheless, try to ignore the distractions around #s and focus on the tasks at hand 5=#N should focus on #h own effort and behaviours, ignoring the distractions around #m . 6=#N should focus on #h behaviour, effort and achievement and ignore the distractions around #m .. 7=#N should try to ignore the distractions around #m and focus on the tasks at hand. 8=#N should focus on #h behaviour, effort and achievement, making sure it is in line with school rules and helpful in completing tasks. COMMENTS: TRA01: Imported Comments 1=#N needs encouragement to take an interest in finding out about the world around #h but I am pleased to say #N is taking more of a part during class discussions. 2=#N needs encouragement to take an interest in finding out about the world around #h and it would be nice to see #h develop confidence enough to suggest ideas during class discussions. 3=#N has approached all aspects of science work with enthusiasm and interest. 4=#N has approached all aspects of science work with interest and enthusiasm. 5=#N really enjoys science and has approached all aspects of our work with interest and enthusiasm. 6=#N has really enjoyed all aspects of the science work we have covered this year and is developing good exploratory techniques. 7=#N has really enjoyed science and is developing good exploratory techniques. 8=#N has shown a quiet interest in the areas we have covered in science. 9=#N has a questioning and inquisitive mind and can offer suggestions and ideas in class discussions. 10=#N has shown a quiet interest in the areas we have covered in science and is developing good exploratory techniques. COMMENTS: TRA01: Introduction 1=In the unit 'Earth, Sun and Moon ' #N learnt about the shapes and relative sizes of the Earth, Sun and Moon. #E has learnt how these three bodies moved relative to each other and how these movements were related to night and day.#H experimental and investigative work in this unit focused on #m making #h own observations and recognising the patterns in both first hand and secondary data.#E then represented this data in #h own graphs. The work in this unit offered #m several opportunit COMMENTS: TRA01: science ability 1=#E grasps new scientific concepts quickly and then can use these to try and explain the results of experiments. 2=#E generally understands new scientific concepts and is beginning to be able to use these to explain the results of experiments. 3=#E generally understands new scientific concepts well and is beginning to be able to use these to explain the results of experiments. 4=#E generally understands new scientific concepts well. 5=#E always understands new scientific concepts well. 6=#E always understands new scientific concepts quickly. 7=#N generally understands new scientific concepts quickly. 8=#E tries hard to understand new scientific concepts and now needs to use #h knowledge to try and explain results of experiments. 9=#E needs careful explanations to learn new scientific concepts but always tries hard to understand. COMMENTS: TRA01: science discussion 1=#E has a good general knowledge and is willing to share this with others during class discussions. 2=#E participates well during class discussions and can always be relied on to offer ideas and suggestions. 3=#E has a good general knowledge and can always be relied on to offer ideas and suggestions during class discussions. 4=#E has a very good general knowledge and is willing to share this with others during class discussions. 5=#E has an excellent general knowledge and is willing to share this with the rest of the class during discussions. 6=#E has a very good general knowledge, but sometimes lacks the confidence to share this with the class during discussions. 7=#E has a good general knowledge, and uses this well to think about what #e is learning. COMMENTS: TRA01: science groupwork 1=#E has a sensible, mature approach to group working, uses equipment carefully and records observations accurately. 2=#E works very well as a member of a group and uses equipment and materials in a sensible and responsible manner.. 3=#E works well as a member of a small group and has had experience of using basic scientific equipment. 4=#E works reasonably well as part of a small group, but must try to keep #h concentration on the task in hand. 5=#E works co-operatively in a group situation, uses equipment maturely, and has learnt to make careful and accurate measurements. 6=#E is getting better at working co-operatively in a small group but sometimes needs to remember to listen carefully to others' suggestions and ideas. COMMENTS: TRA01: science intro 1=#N needs encouragement to take an interest in finding out about the world around #m but I am pleased to say #N is taking more of a part during class discussions. 2=#N needs encouragement to take an interest in finding out about the world around #m and it would be nice to see #h develop confidence enough to suggest ideas during class discussions. 3=#N has approached all aspects of science work with enthusiasm and interest. 4=#N has approached all aspects of science work with interest and enthusiasm. 5=#N really enjoys science and has approached all aspects of our work with interest and enthusiasm. 6=#N has really enjoyed all aspects of the science work we have covered this year and is developing good exploratory techniques. 7=#N has really enjoyed science and is developing good exploratory techniques. 8=#N has shown a quiet interest in the areas we have covered in science. 9=#N has a questioning and inquisitive mind and can offer suggestions and ideas in class discussions. 10=#N has shown a quiet interest in the areas we have covered in science and is developing good exploratory techniques. COMMENTS: TRA01: science practical 1=#E has used a range of basic scientific equipment and has learnt the importance of making careful measurements during an experiment. 2=#E has carefully used a range of basic scientific equipment and has become more accurate when making measurements during an experiment. 3=#E understands the concept of fair testing and applies this during practical work. 4=#E is beginning to understand the concept of fair testing and is starting to apply this during practical work. 5=#E has extended #h understanding of fair testing and is competent in applying this during practical work. 6=#E has discussed the concept of fair testing and is learning to apply this during practical work. 7=#E is capable of drawing appropriate conclusion from experimental results and relating this to #h scientific knowledge. 8=#E now needs to develop the ability to draw appropriate conclusion from experiments and relate #h findings to the scientific concepts learnt. 9=#E can relate the findings from experiments to #h scientific knowledge and can try to explain why #e got the results #e did. 10=#E has learnt to try and relate the results from experiments to #h scientific knowledge, and is beginning to do this successfully. COMMENTS: TRA01: science written 1=#H written reports in science are always of a very good standard and #e has learnt to organise them in a logical way, using charts and graphs where appropriate. 2=#H written work in science has got much better over the year and #e is being more careful to organise reports in a logical way. 3=#H written work in science has got much better over the year and #e has learnt to be more careful to organise reports in a logical way. 4=#H written reports in science are always of a good standard and #e has learnt to organise them in a logical way, using charts and graphs where appropriate. 5=#H written reports in science are always of an excellent standard and #e has learnt to organise them in a logical way, using charts and graphs where appropriate. 6=#H written reports are becoming more carefully organised and #e is beginning to use charts and graphs where appropriate. 7=#E has learnt to improve #h written reports by organising them in a more logical way and including charts and graphs where appropriate. However, #e must make sure to write enough so it reflects more fully what #e has discovered. COMMENTS: TRA02: Diet 1=Section 2-3: Diets 2=#E is able to describe how an imaginative idea about the relationship of diet to health was tested. 3=#E has identified which foods are needs for growth and which foods are primarily for energy. 4=#E can identify some foods which contain large amounts of fat and some which contain large amounts of sugars and #e has recognised that #e should these food groups sparingly. 5=#E is able to identify that fruit and vegetables are essential components of a healthy diet. COMMENTS: TRA02: Evaporation 1=Section 2: Water evaporation & Section 3: Evaporation of other liquids 2=#E was able to identify the process that takes place when water changes to a gas as evaporation. 3=#E could identify a range of contexts in which water evaporates. 4=#E has described some contexts in which other liquids evaporate. 5=#E is able to explain that #e can smell things when liquids evaporate and the gas reaches #h nose. COMMENTS: TRA04: Day & Night 1=Section 4: The changing position of the Sun Section 5: The movement of the Earth 2=#E was able to describe how the apparent position of the Sun changes over the course of a day and #e was able to clarify that this does not mean that the Sun is moving. 3=#E illustrated by using models that different parts of the Earth face the Sun during the course of the day and #e recognised where in the model it is day and where it is night. 4=#E illustrated by using drawings that different parts of the Earth face the Sun during the course of the day. #E is able to say where on the drawing it is day and where it is night. 5=#E is able to explain that the apparent movement of the Sun is a result of the Earth rotating or spinning. COMMENTS: TRA04: Heart & Lungs 1=Section 5: The heart and lungs 2=#E can locate the heart in a model 3D representation of the body and describe how the ribs protect it. 3=#E knows that the heart is a pump because its muscle wall keeps contracting and squeezes the blood in it, forcing blood to move round the body. 4=#E has described through making annotated drawings that the heart pumps blood around the body and #e has identified some parts of the body eg lungs, brains, muscles through which #h blood flows. COMMENTS: TRA05: Pulse Rate 1=Section 6-8: Measuring pulse rate 2=#E was able to describe the connection between #h pulse rate and #h heart beat. 3=#E knows #e has to measure #h resting pulse rate several times to obtaining a reasonably consistent result. 4=#E can, with help, represent the data about #h pulse rate in a bar chart and interpret what this shows #m. 5=#E has planned an investigation to test #h prediction about #h pulse rate. 6=#E is able to make suitable measurements of pulse rate e.g. by carrying out the process on several children. 7=#E is able to construct a line graph to show the effects of exercise on #h pulse rate and describe what #h results show. 8=#E was able to explain how exercise had affected the heart beat in terms of the exercising muscles needing a better supply of blood. 9=#E is able to describe some limitations of #h work. 10=#E has identified in #h leaflet on the human body the parts of the skeleton that moved and which parts of the body needed an improved blood supply. COMMENTS: TRA05: Seasons 1=Section 6: The Sun at different times of the year & Section 7: The Earth's orbit 2=#E is able to generalise that the Sun rises in the East and sets in the West. 3=#E has drawn some simple graphs and identified the patterns in day length over the year. 4=#E is able to state that a year is the time taken for the Earth to make one complete orbit of the Sun. #E has understood this fact know from secondary sources by independenty reading reference books, CD-ROMs and information provided by #h teacher. COMMENTS: TRA07: Changes 1=Section 11: Reversible changes of state 2=#E was able to recognise that melting, freezing, evaporation and condensing are all changes which can be reversed and all changes which involved a change of state. 3=#N has correctly identified examples of melting, freezing, evaporation and condensing. COMMENTS: TRA08: Water Cycle 1=Section 12: The water cycle 2=#N is able to describe the water cycle, naming the processes correctly eg by telling the story of a drop of water from when it left the sea until it returned to the sea. 3=#E has recognised that evaporation and condensation are processes that can be reversed. COMMENTS: use of maths1 1=#E can select appropriate operations when solving more complex, multi-step word problems with success. 2=#E has secure subject knowledge in shape, measuring and data handling. 3=#E has demonstrated a very good understanding of the topics covered. 4=#E is becoming more adept in applying #h knowledge to problem solving situations 5=#E can measure, classify shapes, handle data and recall most times tables accurately. 6=With help, #e can solve problems and handle data. 7=#E has shown good application in all aspects of mathematics 8=#E is able to apply what #e has learnt to problem solving situations. 9=#E is beginning to use mathematical vocabulary appropriately. 10=#E has demonstrated a fair understanding of the topics covered during the year. 11=#E has demonstrated a some understanding of the topics covered. COMMENTS: use of maths2 1=#E is often able to choose the most appropriate operation when solving both simple word problems and two-step word problems with success. 2=#E has a good understanding of the topics covered this year. 3=#E is beginning to apply #h knowledge and understanding to different mathematical situations. 4=#E can use mathematical language to explain why an answer is correct. 5=#E is developing #h confidence with different approaches to solving problems 6=#E has shown great application in all aspects of mathematics and shows #e is capable of working to a high level 7=#E can classify shapes and handle data well 8=#E is beginning to use simple mathematical vocabulary. 9=#E is becoming more adept in applying #h knowledge to problem solving situations 10=#E is often able to choose the most appropriate operation when solving simple word problems; 11=#E must now start to check results thoroughly and increase #h working pace 12=With help, #e can solve problems and handle data 13=#E has a secure knowledge of shape and measure. 14=With some initial help #e can go on to solve problems and handle data 15=#E is starting to use mathematical vocabulary in #h explanations. COMMENTS: written work 1=#H written work in science is always of a very good standard and #e has learnt to organise it in a logical way, using charts and graphs where appropriate. 2=#H written work in science has got much better over the year and #e is being more careful to organise reports in a logical way. 3=#H written work in science has got much better over the year and #e has learnt to be more careful to organise it in a logical way. 4=#H written work in science is always of a good standard and #e has learnt to organise it in a logical way, using charts and graphs where appropriate. 5=#H written work in science is always of an excellent standard and #e has learnt to organise it in a logical way, using charts and graphs where appropriate. 6=#H written work is becoming more carefully organised and #e is beginning to use charts and graphs where appropriate. 7=#H has learnt to improve #h written work by organising it in a more logical way and including charts and graphs where appropriate. 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