/* SAVE YOURSELF HOURS... /* IMPORT THESE COMMENTS INTO: SchoolReportWriter.COM /* No.1 in GOOGLE - "BEST TEACHER REPORTS APP": /* - TRUSTED by 1000s of teachers, since 2012 /* - QUICKLY create personalised reports /* - PASTE into your school system, Word etc /* - GENDER NEUTRAL option /* - DEMO video at SchoolReportWriter.COM /* FOR HELP see end of this document. /* Subjects: Music COMMENTS: extra comments 1=I was very pleased that #N performed in the music recital in November. #E gave an excellent performance and gained valuable experience of performing in front of an audience. 2=We recently had a music recital at school and I think that #N should consider performing in the next recital as #e will gain valuable experience of performing in front of an audience. COMMENTS: Grade 10 extra 1=#N should develop #h keyboard skills so that #h understanding of and ability to use music technology can improve. Better keyboard skills will also allow for greater understanding of music theory such as chords and will benefit #N in semester 2. 2=#N has been a committed member of #grade8projects and I hope #e has been enjoying this. #E should continue to come to rehearsals in semester 2 as we have a lot of exciting performing opportunities in the coming months. 3=#N should consider joining #AOC as this will help develop #h ensemble skills and confidence when performing. 4=#N should consider having instrument lessons as this will help develop #h skills and understanding further. 5=#N has struggled with some aspects of music but always tries hard to achieve the unit objectives. I hope #e will continue to try hard in semester 2. 6=#N would benefit from learning a musical instrument, such as guitar or piano, #e should ask me for a letter about this should you wish to find out more about music instrument lessons. 7=#N has struggled with some aspects of music. This is mainly due to lack of independent work at home to revise and prepare for the tasks. If #e put more effort into this aspect of the subject #e would see more rapid improvements and #h confidence would grow. 8=#N should consider choosing music for DP level next year as #h skills and understanding are already very high and #e would enjoy the challenge that the diploma course offers. COMMENTS: Grade 10 Intro 1=#N has had a successful start to music and I hope that #e will continue to develop #h skills. 2=#N demonstrates a conscientious attitude and a willingness to put a lot effort into every class. 3=#N has had a satisfactory start to music but #h attitude towards homework needs to improve. 4=#N is a polite and well-behaved student. 5=#N is a hardworking student who tries hard in every class. 6=#N has made some progress this semester. 7=#N has struggled with some aspects of music. This is mainly due to lack of independent work at home to revise and prepare for the tasks. If #e put more effort into this aspect of the subject #e would see more rapid improvements and #h confidence would grow. COMMENTS: Grade 10 middle 1=#E plays the #Instrument well and should consider how to improve #h performing skills by taking part in more public performances. There are plenty of opportunities within school to perform to an audience. 2=#E gave a very good performance in the solo performing unit and #e should be proud this. #E needs to #DOWHAT to improve now. 3=#E tried to complete a good performance for the solo performing unit but #e struggled to perform to a satisfactory level. This is mainly due to lack of private practice and preparation - something that is essential to be successful in this subject. COMMENTS: Grade 10 middle 2 1=#N has missed some homework deadlines and this is becoming a problem. #E needs to ensure #e is checking managebac regularly and meeting the deadlines set for each unit. 2=#N regularly fails to reflect on #h artistic process which means there is a limited rate of progress happening. 3=#N should consider joining #AOC as this will help develop #h ensemble skills and confidence when performing. 4=#N should consider having instrument lessons as this will help develop #h skills and understanding further. COMMENTS: Grade 8 Conclusion 2 1=#N has had a successful start to music and I hope that #e will continue to develop #h skills. 2=#N has been a committed member of #grade8projects and I hope #e has been enjoying this. #E should continue to come to rehearsals in semester 2 as we have a lot of exciting performing opportunities in the coming months. 3=#N should consider joining #grade8projects as this will help develop #h ensemble skills and confidence when performing. 4=#N has struggled with some aspects of music but with a little more effort and more enthusiasm in class #e will see more rapid improvements and #h confidence will grow. 5=#N has struggled with some aspects of music but always tries hard to achieve the unit objectives. I hope #e will continue to try hard in semester 2. 6=#N would benefit from learning a musical instrument, such as guitar or piano, #e should ask me for a letter about this should you wish to find out more about music instrument lessons. COMMENTS: Grade 8 Conclusion 3 1=#N has had a successful start to music and I hope that #e will continue to develop #h skills. 2=#N has been a committed member of #grade8projects and I hope #e has been enjoying this. #E should continue to come to rehearsals in semester 2 as we have a lot of exciting performing opportunities in the coming months. 3=#N should consider joining #grade8projects as this will help develop #h ensemble skills and confidence when performing. 4=#N has struggled with some aspects of music but with a little more effort and more enthusiasm in class #e will see more rapid improvements and #h confidence will grow. 5=#N has struggled with some aspects of music but always tries hard to achieve the unit objectives. I hope #e will continue to try hard in semester 2. 6=#N would benefit from learning a musical instrument, such as guitar or piano, #e should ask me for a letter about this should you wish to find out more about music instrument lessons. 7=#N has struggled with some aspects of music. This is mainly due to lack of independent work at home to revise and prepare for the tasks. If #e put more effort into this aspect of the subject #e would see more rapid improvements and #h confidence would grow. COMMENTS: grade 8 intro2 1=#N is a friendly and cheerful member of the class. 2=#N demonstrates a conscientious attitude and a willingness to put a lot effort into every class. 3=#E is able to work independently, asking for assistance only when needed. 4=#E is able to demonstrate responsible behaviour by working cooperatively with a group and showing appreciation for the efforts of others. 5=#N is a polite and well-behaved member of the group. 6=#N has made some progress this semester. COMMENTS: Grade 8 middle 1=#E is encouraged to listen attentively during group sharing times and to remember to raise #h hand to speak 2=During the 12 bar blues #N learnt to play the #grade8projects well and performed an accurate and stylish performance with #h partner. 3=#E has made some progress in music this year. 4=#E has made good progress in music this year. COMMENTS: Grade 8 middle 2 1=#E is encouraged to listen attentively during group sharing times and to remember to raise #h hand to speak. 2=During the 12 bar blues #N learnt to play the #grade8projects well and performed an accurate and stylish performance with #h partner. 3=#E did well in the #grade8projects and gained a high level. #N needs to ensure #e keeps working on #h #grade8projects so that #e can continue to improve this in semester 2. 4=#E made some progress with #grade8projects and was able to #grade8projects at a satisfactory level. #E should try to practice these skills more so that #e can improve this in semester 2. 5=#E struggled with the #grade8projects and did not score a high level in the #grade8projects. #N should try to practice #grade8projects at home so that #e can improve this in semester 2. 6=#E worked hard in the #grade8projects and gained a satisfactory level. #N needs to ensure #e keeps working on #h #grade8projects so that #e can continue to improve this in semester 2. COMMENTS: grade 9 intro sem1 1=#N has had a successful start to music and I hope that #e will continue to develop #h skills. 2=#N demonstrates a conscientious attitude and a willingness to put a lot effort into every class. 3=#N has had a satisfactory start to music but #h attitude towards homework needs to improve. 4=#N is a polite and well-behaved student. 5=#N is a hardworking student who tries hard in every class. COMMENTS: grade 9 middle sem1 1=#E produced a good performance for the popular music unit and worked collaboratively with #h group. #E practiced the #Instrument and performed to a high standard. 2=#E tried to work collaboratively with #h group to produce a performance for the popular music unit. #E struggled with #h confidence during the performance and should consider how #e can improve this. 3=#E tried to produce a good performance for the popular music unit but #e struggled to play the #Instrument to a high standard. #E should consider how #e can improve this for the next performance. 4=#E made some progress with #grade9projects and was able to #grade9projects at a satisfactory level. #E should try to practice these skills more so that #e can improve this in semester 2. COMMENTS: grade 9 middle2 sem1 1=#N worked hard to produce a high standard of composition in the composition unit. #E used music technology to produce a creative piece of music to represent #h chosen photo. 2=#N made some effort to produce a complete composition for the composition unit. #E used music technology successfully but struggled to manipulate the musical elements effectively, #e should consider what could have improved this composition for next time. 3=In the composition unit #N did not consistently focus on #h work and this meant that #h composition wasn't as creative as it could have been. COMMENTS: Homework 1=#N has missed some homework deadlines and this is becoming a problem. #E needs to ensure #e is checking managebac regularly and meeting the deadlines set for each unit. 2=#N has completed some excellent homework projects and always puts a lot of effort into #h work. COMMENTS: Music choices 1=#N should consider choosing music as #h arts choice next year as #e achieve a high level and would enjoy the challenge of a higher level of music making. 2=#N should consider choosing music as #h arts choice next year as #e would enjoy the challenge of a higher level of music making. COMMENTS: Music Intro 1=#N appears to want to do well in this subject but #h approach to #h work needs improvement. #E is easily distracted and will often indulge in conversation rather than applying #s to the work. 2=#N has the ability to do well in music. 3=#N has had a good year in music working with enthusiasm towards each unit. 4=#N has tried hard this year to follow the course content and achieve the objective of each lesson. 5=#N has made good progress this year and shows promise. 6=#N has made some progress this year and should consider how to continue developing #h musical skills. 7=#N appears to want to do well in this subject but #h approach to #h work needs improvement. #E has missed some deadlines this year and has failed to hand in homework or complete it to a satisfactory standard. COMMENTS: Music year 9 Intro 1=#N appears to want to do well in this subject but #h approach to #h work needs improvement. 2=#N has the ability to do well in music. 3=#N has had a good year in music working with enthusiasm towards each unit. 4=#N has tried hard this year to follow the course content and achieve the objective of each lesson. COMMENTS: Sample intro sentence 1=#N has had a mixed year but there are signs of improvement in #h behaviour of late. 2=#N has made steady progress throughout the year. 3=#N has made #SampleRatingList start to the year. COMMENTS: Sample project-work sentence 1=#E has put a lot of effort into #h project-work and I was especially pleased with #h #SampleScienceTopics assignment. 2=Project-work has been done to a minimum standard and is often handed in late. 3=#H project-work has varied considerably however #h #SampleScienceTopics assignment was excellent and has been displayed in reception. COMMENTS: Sample summing-up sentence 1=#N has achieved a well-deserved Level #? overall. Well done #N. 2=#N has achieved a Level #? overall. With a little more effort #e could reach Level #?. 3=#N has not had the best of starts this year and is still working at Level #?. COMMENTS: Year 7 Intro 1=#N appears to want to do well in this subject but #h approach to #h work needs improvement. #E is easily distracted and will often indulge in conversation rather than applying #s to the work. 2=#N appears to want to do well in this subject but #h approach to the work needs improvement. #E has missed some deadlines this year and has failed to hand in homework or complete it to a satisfactory standard. 3=#N has had a good year in music working with enthusiasm towards each unit. 4=#N has made some progress this year. COMMENTS: year 7 music conclusion 1=Overall this has been a pleasing year and I hope #N will continue to work hard in grade 8. 2=This year #N has worked at a satisfactory level during class but homework assignments have been unsatisfactory or not completed. #E should consider how improve this area for grade 8. 3=This year #N has worked at a satisfactory level, #e should consider how to improve #h level of effort in grade 8. COMMENTS: Year 7 music middle 1=During the Chinese music composition unit, #e worked collaboratively to create a good composition. #E can compose music to represent a given scene and is confident when performing to the rest of the group. 2=During the Chinese music composition unit, #e struggled to work collaboratively with the members of #h group. 3=During the Chinese music composition unit, #e had to be encouraged and reminded to actively participate in the composition process. 4=During the Chinese music composition unit, #e worked collaboratively to create a good composition. #E has creative ideas but needs to work on #h confidence when performing to the rest of the group. 5=During the Chinese music composition unit, #e appeared to have some creative ideas but when #h group failed to perform to the rest of the class. #N needs to work on using rehearsal time more effectively so that #e can be more confident when it comes to performance. COMMENTS: Year 7 music middle 2 1=During the instruments of the orchestra unit, #N easily identified the four instrument families and could recognise many of the more common instruments. 2=During the instruments of the orchestra unit, #N struggled to identify the four instrument families and could not recognise many of the more common instruments, #e should develop #h knowledge further by exploring the websites used in class. 3=#N can sing in tune and has a strong voice. #E should consider joining choir. This would give #N more opportunities to explore and develop #h voice, with the added benefit of performing in front of audiences. 4=During the singing unit #N has been reluctant to make any effort to participate or develop #h voice. It has been disappointing to see such a lack of effort towards a unit and #N should consider how to have a better approach to work, for grade 8. COMMENTS: year 8 intro 1=#N is a friendly and cheerful member of the class. 2=#N demonstrates a conscientious attitude and a willingness to put a lot effort into every class. 3=#E is able to work independently, asking for assistance only when needed. 4=#E is able to demonstrate responsible behaviour by working cooperatively with a group and showing appreciation for the efforts of others. 5=#N is a polite and well behaved member of the group. 6=#N has made some progress this semester. COMMENTS: year 8 music conclusion 1=#N has made good progress this year and should continue to find opportunities to make music with other musicians. 2=#N has made good progress this year and should consider how to improve criteria C by reflecting in more detail. 3=#N has made some progress this year but should consider how to better apply #s in #h subjects to allow for faster progress. 4=#N has made good progress this year and should continue to work hard in #h arts subject next year. 5=#N should reflect on this year and should think about how to achieve good results in #h chosen arts subject next year. COMMENTS: Year 8 music middle 1=#N produced a good composition during the minimalism unit and demonstrated a strong understanding of music technology. 2=#N worked hard during the composition unit but needs to develop #h keyboard skills. Better keyboard skills will help #N use the music technology in a more effective manner and enable #m to produce more creative compositions. 3=This semester #N was able to compose music using garageband. #E should develop #h understanding of music technology further and become more familiar with garageband and other software such as Sibelius. 4=During the orchestral instruments unit, #N demonstrated a good understanding of the four instrument families. #E should continue to develop #h knowledge of the orchestral instruments using the websites we explored during the lessons. 5=#N should consider having instrumental lessons, inside or outside of school, #h performing skills are weak and with more individual training on #h instrument, this will improve. COMMENTS: Year 8 music middle 2 1=#E has been part of #? this semester, which has been very good for #h confidence with performing. #N should continue to participate next year as #e has been a strong addition and there are lots of performing opportunities. 2=#N should consider joining one of extra curricular activities such as #? as this will help #m develop #h confidence. 3=#N must continue to listen to music and build #h confidence to join in class discussions more. COMMENTS: Year 9 music conclusion 1=Overall, I am pleased with #N's progress this semester. I hope that #e can continue the good work into grade 10. 2=To improve #N needs to be more organised and meet homework and class deadlines. This will enable #m to receive more regular feedback and #h knowledge of each unit will develop at a more satisfactory rate. 3=#N has had some success with some areas of the subject as is reflected in #h grades but #e needs to improve criterion C by writing more detailed reflections. COMMENTS: Year 9 music middle 1=#E composed a creative piece of music based on a ground bass and demonstrated a good ability to use music software to manipulate and edit sounds. 2=#N is able to to improvise repeated patterns and recognises how the different musical elements are combined. 3=#N must continue to listen to music and build #h confidence to join in class discussions more. 4=#E worked hard during the composition unit to develop #h music technology skills , however, to produce more creative compositions #N should try to be more imaginative when composing. 5=#E made some progress during the jazz unit and showed a good understanding of the Blues, #e would benefit from further improvisation with musical instruments such as inventing and repeating patterns. 6=#E enjoys all music activities and participates with enthusiastic interest. 7=However, #N does not always show particular interest in music and needs to be encouraged and reminded to join in with practical and listening tasks. COMMENTS: Year 9 music targets 1=#N should develop #h keyboard skills so that #h understanding of and ability to use music technology can improve. Better keyboard skills will also allow for greater understanding of music theory such as chords and will benefit #N in grade 10 music. 2=#N has good keyboard skills but #h understanding of and ability to use music technology needs improvement. We will be using music technology throughout the course to compose music and if #N wants to succeed in this area; more practise is needed. 3=#H attendance is not always consistent causing #m to miss out on important stages of the learning. #E has missed deadlines due to the fact #e has not caught up with missed work after an absence. 4=I would like to see #N participating in one of our AOC's as this would help #m to develop #h confidence in music. 5=#N should consider having instrumental lessons, inside or outside of school, #h performing skills are weak and with more individual training on #h instrument, this will improve. 6=#N has been a committed and enthusiastic member of #grade9projects, I hope #e is enjoying this and will continue to attend in semester 2. 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