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COMMENTS: Intro and progress ks3 1=#N has made excellent progress and has worked diligently in this subject. 2=#N has made excellent progress and has shown great enthusiasm in this subject. 3=#N has made very good progress and has worked with enthusiasm in this subject. 4=#N has made good progress and has worked with interest in this subject. 5=#N has made some good progress and has worked with interest in this subject. 6=#N has made some very pleasing progress and has worked with interest in this subject. 7=#N has made some very pleasing progress and has worked with interest throughout the year. COMMENTS: Introduction and progress 1=#N has made excellent progress and has shown a keen interest in this subject. 2=#N has made very good progress and has shown a keen interest in this subject. 3=#N has made good progress and has worked with interest in this subject. 4=#N has made some pleasing progress and has shown some interest in this subject. 5=#N has made some limited progress and has shown little interest in this subject. COMMENTS: knowledge and understanding 1=#E has an excellent understanding of the topics covered and is able to apply #h learning to a range of new contexts. 2=#E has an excellent understanding of the topics covered and is beginning to apply #h learning to a range of new contexts. 3=#E has a good understanding of the topics covered and is beginning to apply #h learning to a range of new contexts. 4=#E has a good understanding of the topics covered and must now begin to apply #h learning to a range of new contexts. 5=#E has a reasonable understanding of the topics covered but must try to apply #h learning to scientific investigations. 6=#E has a limited understanding of the topics covered and would benefit from revisiting some areas of the curriculum studied. COMMENTS: practical and group work 1=#N enjoys all aspects of practical and group work, and always conducts #s in a mature and responsible manner. 2=#N enjoys all aspects of practical and group work, and usually conducts #s in a mature and responsible manner. 3=#N usually works well in a group and carries out practical activities in a safe and sensible manner. 4=#N can work well as part of a group and usually carries out practical activities in a safe and sensible manner. 5=#N can work well as part of a group and but would benefit from better organisation when carrying out practical activities. 6=#N finds working in a groups challenging and requires support when carrying out practical activities. 7=When carrying out an investigation #N can #sci-enq1 8=When carrying out an investigation #N can #sci-enq2 9=When carrying out an investigation #N is starting to #sci-enq1 10=When carrying out an investigation #N is starting to #sci-enq2 11=#N enjoys all aspects of the subjects, and always conducts #s in a mature and responsible manner. 12=#N enjoys most aspects of the subjects, and always conducts #s in a mature and responsible manner. 13=#N enjoys most aspects of the subjects, and usually conducts #s in a mature and responsible manner. 14=When carrying out an investigation #N can #sci-enq3 COMMENTS: PSHE 2 1=#E has shown that #e can discuss a range of complex and sensitive issues in a mature and sensible manner. 2=#E has shown that #e can discuss a range of complex and probing issues with maturity and sensitivity. 3=#E can discuss #h opinions about a range of issues, with growing confidence. 4=#E is starting to share #h ideas about a range of issues, in small group discussions. 5=#E is reluctant to share #h ideas about a range of issues, even in small group discussions. COMMENTS: PSHE 3 1=#N is a good listener. #E is able to listen carefully and respectfully to #h peers and offers thoughtful comments and responses. 2=#N is a good listener. #E is able to listen carefully and respectfully to #h peers and is starting to offer thoughtful comments and responses. 3=#N's listening skills are developing well. #E is able to listen respectfully to #h peers and sometimes responds with appropriate ideas and questions. 4=#N usually listens respectfully to #h classmates and, when prompted can ask thoughtful questions. 5=#N sometimes listens carefully to #h classmates, but can become easily distracted during class discussions. #E is often reluctant to share #h ideas in whole class settings. COMMENTS: PSHE 4 1=#N has shown an excellent understanding of the topics covered in this subject and #h work is always completed with great care. 2=#N has shown an excellent understanding of the topics covered in this subject and #h work is always completed with care. 3=#N has shown a good understanding of the topics covered in this subject and #h work is always completed with care. 4=#N has shown a good understanding of the topics covered in this subject and #h work is usually completed with care. 5=#N has shown a sound understanding of the topics covered in this subject and #h work is usually completed with care. 6=#N has shown a good understanding of the topics covered in this subject but #h work would sometimes benefit from more care. 7=#N has shown a sound understanding of the topics covered in this subject but is often very slow to complete written tasks. As a result #h work can be very brief and incomplete. 8=#N has shown a sound understanding of the topics covered in this subject but #h work requires much more care and effort. COMMENTS: PSHE 5 1=To continue to make excellent progress next year, #N should 2=To continue to make good progress next year, #N should 3=To make good progress next year, #N must 4=To continue to make progress next year, #N must COMMENTS: PSHE 6 1=try to consider other points of view about a range of topics. 2=ensure #e takes a full and active role in class discussions. 3=completes all written work to the very best of #h ability. 4=listen carefully and respectfully to the opinions of other people and try to respond with appropriate questions. 5=apply #h developing skills to a wider range of issues. COMMENTS: PSHE intro 1=#N has worked with interest and enthusiasm this year. 2=#N has worked with interest this year. 3=#N has worked with enthusiasm this year. 4=#N has worked with a positive attitude this year. 5=#N has made some encouraging progress this year. COMMENTS: Sample intro sentences 1=#N is an outstanding student who has worked very hard throughout the #Time-period and I expect #m to do well in #h exams next year. 2=#N has had a mixed #Time-period but there are signs of improvement in #h behaviour of late. 3=After a difficult start #N has done some excellent work and is now back on target. A very pleasing #Time-period. Well done #N! 4=#N is a friendly and hard-working member of the class and has put in a steady performance throughout the #Time-period. 5=Overall #N has worked very well but there are a few issues with #h time-keeping and homework that #e needs to address. 6=We have been working on the Environmental Issues module throughout the #Time-period. #N seems to enjoy this topic and has made very pleasing progress. COMMENTS: Sample project-work sentences 1=#E has worked hard this year on all of #h projects but I was especially impressed with the high-quality of #h #Science-topics assignment. 2=Project-work has been done to a minimum standard and is often handed in late. To improve #e needs to #How-to-improve. 3=Although #h #Science-topics project-work was satisfactory, I do expect #m to do more background research next time. 4=#H project-work is always excellent as demonstrated in #h #Science-topics assignment. We were all very impressed with #h creative and entertaining website designs which were an inspiration to the class. 5=#H project-work has varied considerably, however #h highly-imaginative #Science-topics project was excellent and was displayed in reception at the School Open Day. An excellent achievement #N. COMMENTS: Sample summing-up sentences 1=#N always tries #h best and has achieved a well-deserved Level #? overall. An excellent performance, keep it up! 2=#N has reached Level #?. This was #h target and #e should be proud of #s. To ensure #e keeps this up next year #e should #How-to-improve. 3=#N has achieved a Level #? overall. #E often works below #h best and with a little more effort #e could easily reach Level #?. To improve #e should #How-to-improve. 4=#N has not had the best of starts this year and is still working at Level #?. #E rarely completes #h work on time. To achieve more next year #e needs to #How-to-improve. COMMENTS: signature 1=S. Harker COMMENTS: standard of work 1=#H written work is always of a high standard and is completed carefully and thoughtfully. 2=#H written work is usually of a high standard and is completed carefully and thoughtfully. 3=#H written work is usually of a good standard and is completed with care. 4=#H written work is usually of a good standard but sometimes lacks care and attention to detail. 5=#H written work is usually of an acceptable standard but lacks care and attention to detail. 6=#H written work is would benefit from much more care and attention to detail.. 7=#H written work is usually of a good standard but #e can be very slow to complete #h tasks and work is therefore often incomplete. 8=#H written work is usually of a good standard but can be brief and would benefit from more detail and depth. 9=#H written work is always of a high standard and is completed carefully and thoughtfully. #E can describe and explain new ideas #ideas 10=#H written work is usually of a high standard and is completed carefully and thoughtfully. #E can describe and explain new ideas #ideas 11=#H written work is always of a good standard and is completed carefully and thoughtfully. #E is beginning describe and explain new ideas #ideas 12=#H written work is usually of a good standard and is completed carefully and thoughtfully. #E is beginning to apply new ideas to new contexts and can explain them #ideas COMMENTS: targets 1=To continue to make good progress #N must 2=To continue to make good progress #N must 3=To make further progress #N must COMMENTS: targets 2 1=#sci-enq1 2=#sci-enq2 3=ensure that #e avoids unnecessary distractions in the lesson. 4=ensure that #h work is always completed to the best of #h ability. 5=ask for help when unsure of the task. 6=try to complete each task in the time given. 7=#sci-enq3 COMMENTS: targets 3 1=#sci-enq3 COMMENTS: targets skills and knowledge 1=#targets-skills 2=#targets-knowledge LIST: How-to-improve 1=focus more in the lessons 2=put more time aside for homework 3=try not to chat during lessons 4=do more project research on the internet 5=develop #h computer skills 6=pay more attention to instructions LIST: ideas 1=clearly and confidently. 2=with growing confidence. 3=clearly. 4=in a range of ways including diagrams. 5=and apply them skilfully to new contexts. LIST: sci-enq1 1=generate scientific questions to investigate 2=generate scientific questions to investigate with support. 3=make simple predictions. 4=make predictions with reasons. 5=make predictions using #h scientific knowledge. 6=identify key variables in an investigation. 7=identify which variables must be changed or kept the same. 8=identify which variables to change, measure or observe. 9=identify independent, dependent and control variables. 10=identify the independent and dependent variables. 11=identify the control variables. 12=suggest how to find the answer to a scientific question. 13=plan a simple investigation. 14=plan an investigation to answer a scientific question. 15=take measurements and make observations with support. 16=take measurements with increasing accuracy. 17=make and record simple observations. 18=understand the importance of taking repeat measurements. 19=confidently and accurately take a range of measurements. 20=identify which measurements may need to be repeated. LIST: sci-enq2 1=present results in simple tables and diagrams. 2=present results in simple tables. 3=present results in tables and bar charts. 4=present results in a range of ways. 5=present results using bar charts and line graphs. 6=explain what #h results show. 7=identify patterns in #h results. 8=explain patterns in results using #h scientific knowledge 9=begin to give reasons for patterns in #h results. 10=suggest improvements to #h investigations. 11=use #h results to suggest new investigations. 12=evaluate the reliability of #h results. 13=explain how to make a fair test. LIST: sci-enq3 1=evaluate risks and hazards. 2=evaluate methods for objectivity and reliability 3= appreciate how methods and theories develop. 4=evaluate the reproducibility of an investigation. 5=select and plan appropriate investigations. 6=identify independent, dependent and control variables. 7=make increasingly accurate observations and measurements. 8=identify when to take repeat readings and calculate mean. 9=record data in more complex graphs, tables and diagrams. 10=use simple equations and calculate results. 11=independently present data in appropriate graphs. 12=interpret results, making appropriate calculations. 13=identify patterns or relationships in results. 14=use data to support patterns and data in results. 15=explain data using scientific knowledge. 16=make links between results, data and predictions 17=evaluate data and reliability of methods. 18=identify sources of error and suggest improvements. 19=evaluate data and suggest further scientific questions. LIST: Science-topics 1=Heating and Cooling 2=Light and Sound 3=Exploring Magnetism 4=Changing Earth 5=Human Body 6=Space 7=Classification 8=Life Cycles 9=Materials and their properties 10=Dissolving and separating 11=Evolution and inheritance 12=Energy 13=Acids and alkalis 14=Chemical reactions 15=Cells and organisation LIST: targets-knowledge 1=revise aspects of the energy topic. 2=revise aspects of the acids and alkalis topic. 3=revise aspects of the light and sound topic. 4=revise aspects of the chemical reactions topic. 5=revise aspects of the cells and organisation topic. 6=revise aspects of the materials topic 7=revise aspects of the evolution and inheritance topic. 8=revise aspects of the dissolving topic. 9=revise aspects of the electricity topic. 10=revise aspects of the humans and other animals topic. 11=revise aspects of the space topic. 12=revise aspects of the Earth and Space topic. 13=revise aspects of the classification topic. 14=revise aspects of the Life-cycles topic. 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